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大家看看我这句英文,提点建议啊,我写作文呢...Withthedevelopmentofmedicalscience,advancedskillcouldsavemorepeoplethanbefore.这句话有语病么?怎么写更好呢?
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大家看看我这句英文,提点建议啊,我写作文呢...

Withthedevelopmentofmedicalscience,advancedskillcouldsavemorepeoplethanbefore.

这句话有语病么?怎么写更好呢?

蒋嘉之回答:
  个人的意见啊,我觉得用:先进的技术能拯救比以前更多的人有点奇怪,直接说We或者Doctorcansavemorepatientthanbeforeduetothefastdevelopmentofmedicalscience,或者说sincethemedicalsciencem...
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