问题标题：
简单的英语小段、语法检查HedgehogBathRecord'First,Iwasstandinginthepool,thewatersubmergedmyfeet,Ifeelabitcold.Then,mymumdroppedalotofbathlotionintothepool,andfoamwasfullofthepool.Next,shewashedmewithtooth
问题描述：
简单的英语小段、语法检查
HedgehogBathRecord'
First,Iwasstandinginthepool,thewatersubmergedmyfeet,Ifeelabitcold.
Then,mymumdroppedalotofbathlotionintothepool,andfoamwasfullofthepool.
Next,shewashedmewithtoothbrush.
Last,mumwateredmetillthefoamonmybodydisappear
刘润来回答：
First,Iwasstandinginthepool,thewatersubmergedmyfeet,Ifeelabitcold.改成“First,Iwasstandinginthepool.Myfeetwassubmergedbythewater.Ifeltabitcold."Then,mymumdroppedalotof...
