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【下面文章有没有病句,(蓝体字不管它)Read"AliceinWonderland"havefeeling"AliceinWonderland"tellsthestoryofagirlnamedAlicedowntherabbithole,andthenintothewonderland.ShemettheWhiteRabbit,TweedleDum,TweedleDee】
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下面文章有没有病句,(蓝体字不管它)

Read"AliceinWonderland"havefeeling

"AliceinWonderland"tellsthestoryofagirlnamedAlicedowntherabbithole,andthenintothewonderland.ShemettheWhiteRabbit,TweedleDum,TweedleDee,theCaterpillar,theCheshireCat,theWhiteQueenandsoon.TheyhelpedAlicedefeatedtheQueenofHearts’Jabberwocky.

IthinkAliceisverybrave.Althoughatfirstshedarednotbelieve.Shewasalittleafraid.However,ineveryone'shelpandherownefforts,shefoundhercourage.Alicerepresentsthewarriors.Shedaredtofightagainstevil.TheHatterrepresentsextremelyhateevil.Heisverysmart,cleverandhumor.TheCaterpillarandtheCheshireCataremysteriousfigures.Theyarelikethewisemen.TheyalwaysgaveAlicetherightdirection.TheWhiteRabbitrepresentsthefaithofthepeople.TweedleDumandTweedleDeerepresentthestillwaterrunsdeep.TheWhiteQueenrepresentsthenicepeople.Shehopedforworldpeaceandnowar.Thesepeoplearebraveandjustice.

However,theQueenofHeartsrepresentsthegreatestevilandcorruptgovernment.Shealwaysusedviolence.Herservantsonbehalfofthenobles.Theydeceivedothersfortheirownvanity.Theirfatemustbeshameful!

Thisbooktheauthorexpressedhatredanddisgustevilforces.Hedesiredpeace,securityandhappiness.Themagicoffairytalestofantasy,wittyhumor,proudlyofpoetry,breaksthroughthetraditionalWesternchildren'sliteraturemoralisminflexibleformula."AliceInWonderland"isofepoch-makingmilepost.

纳卡诺回答:
  大概看了一下   首先,全文时态混乱,不堪入目,讲故事内容,最好全用一般现在时   第三行应是defeat原形helpsb.do或todo   第四行shedoesn'tdaretobelieve   第五行最好是withothers'helpfound也不太恰当   第六行dared----becomesbraveenough会好一点   第七行thewisemen去掉the   第八行第一个the去掉   后面看不下去了   简直是纯Chinglish   前面肯定还有一堆错   这是从哪档的文章
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