写了一个博士英文留学自荐信,水平太差,太中国化求高手相助,使其像一篇地道的留学自荐信,急用,
DearProfessor:
IamRobbinZhong(Zhongyan-qian),male,borninGuizhou.IwasenrolledbyilinMedicalCollegein2004,majoringinBiomedicalEngineering.Afterfouryearsofstudy,Inotonlyacquiredknowledgeandskillsbutalsoobtainedavigorouswayofacademicthinkingof.However,Ialsofeelstronglylackofknowledge,soin2008,aftergraduationIwenttoUniversityofShanghaiforScienceandTechnology(USST)tostudyassiduouslyasagraduate.Becauseoftheloveforthefieldofbiomedicalengineering,especiallyforbiomedicalelectronics,Ididnotchangemymajorduringthegraduatebuttocontinuelearninginthisfield.IamabouttograduateinMarch2011.
Whilestudyingcoursesrequiredatschool,Ihavehosted3projectsandparticipatedinone.Also,Itookpartinsomesocialactivitiesinmysparetimetobemuchmoreabletoachievebetterandsocialstandards.
Summingupmylifeincollege,forthelimitationofknowledge,abilitiesandconditionsatthattime,Icouldn’tdosomespecificandin-depthwork.Whileinmylifeofgraduate,basedonthesolidfoundationonelectronics,IhavethechancetoparticipateinanumberofprojectsonbiologicaltissueconductedbymyinstructorsthroughwhichIcanuseengineeringmeanstotrulysolvethemedicalproblemssothatbiomedicalengineeringsystemisfurtherimproved.Andmysubjectofgraduateisgraduallyshiftedfrompureelectronicapplicationstothatwhichdealswithpracticalengineeringproblems.Inthiswaycanitdisplaysareale-sciencereflecttherelativeadvantageofmeansofimplementationofotherprojects.
Ihadalsowonseveralscholarships,andtookpartinNationalUndergraduateElectronicDesignContesttwicerankingthethirdplaceprovincially.Inthesecondclassroom,IhaveusedVbasafrontpanelAccessasdatabasedevelopmentofthe“officeequipmentmanagementsystem”.Inaddition,Ihavealotofhobbieslikechess,badminton,forbadmintonIwasawardedinthecompetition.AlthoughImajorinelectronics,IhaveastronginterestinotherrelatedfieldsinwhichIbelieveIhavetheabilitytodoitwell.Long-termtraininghasmademecheerful,humorous,energetic,liketothink,goodatsummarizingandsolvingproble