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【帮我看看这篇短文的语法错误“TheHouseonMangoStreet”isanarrativebySandraCisneros;tellsEsperanzawhoisunderashamefuleconomicalsituation.Somecrucialsymbolicstructurethatcharacterizeinthestoryisthepowerfulhous】
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帮我看看这篇短文的语法错误

“TheHouseonMangoStreet”isanarrativebySandraCisneros;tellsEsperanzawhoisunderashamefuleconomicalsituation.Somecrucialsymbolicstructurethatcharacterizeinthestoryisthepowerfulhouse.“Theyalwaystoldusthatonedaywewouldmoveintoahouse,arealhousethatwouldbeoursforalwayssowewouldn’thavetomoveeachyear”(Cisneros5).Esperanzawantsaactualhousebecauseforher,ahouserepresenteverythingthatshedoesnothavesuchasstability,warmth,success,andamongothers.Becauseoftheirpoverties,Esperanzastrugglesbyherselfandshedecidestogetarealhouse,ahousethatshecouldpointto.Anotherimportantsymbolofthestoryisthecomparisonofhairs;shethinkshermother’shairisbeautifulandspecial.“Mymother’shair,likelittlerosettes,likelittlecandycirclesallcurlyandprettybecauseshepinneditinpincurlsallday,sweettoputyournoseintowhensheisholdingyou.Inherpersonalperceptivefeeling,mother’shairalwayssymbolizeswarmthandsafety.FinallythesesymbolsaretotallyshowedEsperanza’sdreamsandthinking;thehouseandhermother’shairimplythemeaningoffamily.

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  我觉得全文时态最好改成过去时   最后FinallythesesymbolsaretotallyshowedEsperanza’sdreamsandthinking;thehouseandhermother’shairimplythemeaningoffamily   改成FinallythesesymbolshavetotallyshownEsperanza’sdreamsandthinking;thehouseandhermother’shairimpliedthemeaningofafamily
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